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Các ví dụ nâng cấp câu band 5 - band 9

Cùng một nội dung, nhưng tác giả của những câu văn này đã khéo léo "hô biến", nâng cấp chúng từ band 5 - 6 lên band 7 - 9 rất thuyết phục và đặc sắc !

We don't talk any more. (BAND 5)

We aren't on speaking terms. (BAND 9)

I have a sister and a brother. (BAND 5)
I have two siblings. (BAND 9)

He stands by me. (BAND 6)
He sticks by me. (BAND 9)

We made up after getting into an argument. (BAND 6)
We patched things up after getting into an argument. (BAND 9)

Stress is an integral part of this job. (BAND 6)
Stress is part and parcel of this job. (BAND 9)

I will get married tomorrow. (BAND 6)
I will tie the knot tomorrow (BAND 9)

I can't understand her. (BAND 5)
I can't relate to her. (BAND 7-8)

The staff is friendly. (BAND 5)
The staff shows me great hospitality. (BAND 7-8)

I am very close to my mother. (BAND 5)
I am very attached to my mother. (BAND 7-8)

My mother brings me up. (BAND 6)
My mother rears her children. (BAND 7-8)

I am not allowed to interact with bad people. (BAND 6)
I am not permitted to associate with drug addicts and alcoholics. (BAND 9)

The weather is really bad now. (BAND 5)
The weather is getting worse and worse. (BAND 6)
Foul weather has caused a lot of damage to property. (BAND 9)

She is an intelligent girl. (BAND 5)
She is as sharp as a tack. (BAND 7)
She is an able girl. (BAND 9)

He explained why he got really angry with me. (BAND 6)
He accounted for his anger towards me. (BAND 9)

He is not a good student. (BAND 5)
He is not very academic (BAND 9)

He is responsible for what he has caused. (BAND 6)
He shoulders the responsibility for what he has caused. (BAND 7)
He is accountable for what he has caused. (BAND 9)

Your speech is very understandable. (BAND 5)
Your speech is very accessible. (BAND 9)

Young people are often superficial. (BAND 6)
Adolescents are often superficial. (BAND 9)

He is a cute boy. (BAND 5)
He is such a little affectionate boy. (BAND 9)
She is a newcomer. (BAND 5)
She is a breath of fresh air. (BAND 9)

Despite her expertise, she isn’t good at teaching. (BAND 6)
For all her expertise, she isn’t good at teaching. (BAND 9)
People from all walks of life join the competition. (BAND 7)
People come in all shapes and sizes joining the competition. (BAND 9)

Only you know how you feel. (BAND 6)
You alone know how you feel. (BAND 9)

He compares the similarities between human being and monkey. (BAND 6)

He draws an analogy between human being and monkey. (BAND 9)

I am among a dense and impenetrable jungle with all the living things. (BAND 6)
I am amid a dense and impenetrable jungle with all the living things. (BAND 9)

He asserts that he is guiltless. (BAND 7)
He alleges that he is guiltless. (BAND 9)

I have an exciting conversation with her. (BAND 5)
I have an animated conversation with her (BAND 9)

In the past, people used to live a peaceful life. (BAND 5)
In retrospect/ at one time or another, people used to live a peaceful life. (BAND 9)

I am studying hard to prepare for the final exam at school. (BAND 5)
I am studying hard in the preparation for the final exam at school. (BAND 6)
I am hitting the books in anticipation of the final exam at school. (BAND 9)

My personality is totally different from my sister’s. (BAND 5)
My sister and I are like chalk and cheese. (BAND 7)
My sister and I are poles apart in personality. (BAND 9)

I apologized for my mistake. (BAND 5)
I was very apologetic about my mistake (BAND 9)

We suffered from serious injuries after the incident. (BAND 6)
We suffered from appalling injuries after the terrifying incident. (BAND 9)

I am keen on doing extreme sports. (BAND 6)
I have a thirst for doing extreme sports. (BAND 7)
I have a crush on doing extreme sports. (BAND 9)
I have an appetite for doing extreme sports such as bungee jumping or mountain climbing. (BAND 9)

She works hard, so she passes the exam. (BAND 5)
She applies herself, so she passes the exam. (BAND 9)

I understand that it is a difficult decision for you to make. (BAND 6)
I appreciate that it is a difficult decision for you to make. (BAND 9)

My house has been existed for almost 130 years. (BAND 5)
My house has been around for some 130 years. (BAND 9)

My dream is to become a doctor. (BAND 5)
My aspiration is to work as a doctor. (BAND 9)

He hopes to win this competition. (BAND 5)
He aspires to win this competition. (BAND 9)

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